Wednesday, April 9, 2008

hey sorry last one was to big i think so here is a small version.

1 comment:

MR.SHIZZLA said...

Hey, final get to critic again.
Ok so I am liking what goes on in the middle part of the painting, texture , composition.
What throws me off unfortunately (because i love the idea and the piece in general) is the foreground , the green grass...believe it is missing value, needs to pop some more. In addition that green is too similar to the green on top of the mountain so I think that is what creates a flat look which you can easily changing the values in those colors and also please ,make the cracks in the mountain top much smaller, but detail.