Hey, final get to critic again. Ok so I am liking what goes on in the middle part of the painting, texture , composition. What throws me off unfortunately (because i love the idea and the piece in general) is the foreground , the green grass...believe it is missing value, needs to pop some more. In addition that green is too similar to the green on top of the mountain so I think that is what creates a flat look which you can easily brake...by changing the values in those colors and also please ,make the cracks in the mountain top much smaller, but detail.
hey sorry last one was to big i think so here is a small version.
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Hey, final get to critic again.
Ok so I am liking what goes on in the middle part of the painting, texture , composition.
What throws me off unfortunately (because i love the idea and the piece in general) is the foreground , the green grass...believe it is missing value, needs to pop some more. In addition that green is too similar to the green on top of the mountain so I think that is what creates a flat look which you can easily brake...by changing the values in those colors and also please ,make the cracks in the mountain top much smaller, but detail.
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