- the boxes are messing you up. they are showing that there is no perspective. also there is no variety in them, and no definition as to what they are. gray boxes in a junk yard. all the same color, shape and size.
- the textures are too real and clash against our painting style. textures should be a little accent and not the whole detail.
- i like the repeating cranes. i think what would give it more interesting composition is to have them in different positions. like some crane would be down more than the others, etc etc.
- the robot is the topic of this piece. our eyes go straight there. give us epic! let the robot or the platform BE the subject.
need some help with this dude here. i think i been looking at it to long :P
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a couple of things:
- the boxes are messing you up. they are showing that there is no perspective. also there is no variety in them, and no definition as to what they are. gray boxes in a junk yard. all the same color, shape and size.
- the textures are too real and clash against our painting style. textures should be a little accent and not the whole detail.
- i like the repeating cranes. i think what would give it more interesting composition is to have them in different positions. like some crane would be down more than the others, etc etc.
- the robot is the topic of this piece. our eyes go straight there. give us epic! let the robot or the platform BE the subject.
<3
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