Tuesday, September 2, 2008
this is a 20 minute sketch done prior to heading out to work. I'm starting to develop this character further, trying to find out who she is by doing all of these sketches. I'm starting to go towards a woman terrorist feel, with some kind tank girl edge to it. women, robots, and guns. how can i go wrong?
heres my own critique: i need to figure out properly the anatomy, for example the left arm with the gun looks fucked up. as well as her legs. the legs i just need to fix it to fit the right angle.
it doesnt really showcase that she's a badass, so either i redo this or try to salvage it. she's smiling in face of danger, but that's not very readable. the background is a great prop to set the mood. im just so tired of this, and it's kind of cool in a way that im trying different poses, but i feel that for something like this, i might need to come back to my usual formula: face front, standing, palms out.
Posted by Angelo Cordon at 11:07 PM