Wednesday, September 17, 2008

looks better, i hope.


MR.SHIZZLA said...

yes the spikes work way better now, looks good.
I am still not convinced about the shell providing a roof for the creatures head, if you get what I mean.
And I am convinced that you need a different background color, as said you don't need a background painting, but black and white background, not cool, in hard words!!!looks cheap that way. use a gray down tone of a color even if you want such a gray background a gray derived from black with your creature in a warm reddish tone brings down your piece, which otherwise could shine much stronger. If you want to put the emphasis on the character let the background push it.
It would be nice if you could get some critic from our other ghostly members??? :)

Carlos Talbott said...

dude!!!!!!!! you rock!! love to know that there's people in this world that helping on and other to be better!!!

gracias my friend!!

MR.SHIZZLA said...

hehe no problem!!!keep at it. Helps me too. Makes me see some mistakes I could be doing aswell, but out of subjectivity I am can't see it.
Glad I am of help.
I checked ot Ryan dunnes' stuff , really nice, I wrote him email as well.
I hope he will have some time. So strange I never met that guy.